Another tune im working on id like you all to have a listen to, please...

 

It's called Hoover 1 (couldnt think of a name)

 

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Its the first mix, so it will change a bit

no sound at work mate, will have a go when at home later

Some comments on your production:

* The kick sounds a bit lightweight compared with your bass.

* The hihats are very lightweight (they sound like they've been HP filtered). It would nice to hear a bit more midrange in them.

 

It would be great to hear some more interesting percussion. Basically it's just a kick+hihats+snare at the moment. It would be nice to hear some other drums, and maybe put a bit more "shuffle" in the rhythm.

 

Haven't really got much else to say: the tune sounds very very derivative to me. It is rhythmically interesting in places, but nearly all the sounds are dated (hoovers, those "old skool" chord stabs, etc etc). My honest opinion is "heard it all before" but then I've heard a lot of hard house (too much!)

 

Hope the production comments are useful. You obviously have some skills there, just try to be a bit more original!

Thanks for your comments, its really appreciated

 

The tune was ment to sound 'old skool' so to speak so im glad you picked up on that..

 

Again thanks for having a listen

to be honnest, its a very avarage tune that will just blend into hundreds of other tunes by hopeful producers.

 

you're years ahead of me in production skill so cant really comment or fault that. but i did think the ideas behind the track are a little lacking.

 

this is probably something that would make a great b side to a memorable a side track.

 

 

I like the way you put that

 

Cheers for the comments

you know me, if theres a nice way of putting something, i probably wont think of saying it.

 

production wise tho, it didnt seem to have ne nasty bits too it at all.

QUOTE (Mr_Happy @ Mar 22 2004, 23:05)

you know me, if theres a nice way of putting something, i probably wont think of saying it.

Lawrence is getting better at the diplomatic approach to feedback

 

sorry chric i forgot to listen last night will do tonight mate

and cheers for the pm re percy grona

... no worries m8

updated this a bit if anyone wants to have another listen put some acid in there and a new kick / bass line as well

Edited March 25, 200420 yr by ChrisT