I've been inspired by Kether's 'split an infinitive' thread...anyone fancy a few posts in Haiku? or am I going too far

 

i'll start:

 

I sit, wondering.

On the Club The World Forum.

What will I post next?

 

What next I wonder...posts in Tanka? Iambic Pentameter? Chaucerian Couplets?...hmmmmm perhaps not

WHAT???

Sorry, think i've gone too far...or as Jay said in the other thread 'dickheads'

I'll get me coat

nicely wrote ... aren't they supposed to be 5, 7 then 5 again

Edited April 28, 200420 yr by Dawn

QUOTE (Dawn @ Apr 28 2004, 12:39)

nicely wrote ... aren't they supposed to be 5, 7 then 5 again

Yep...it's a bit harder to do in english than it is in japanese...I suppose it all depends on whether you think "forum" is one syllable or two...i'm going for two

My head hurts... more than normal anyway.

piss poor attempt there

 

forum definitly 1

QUOTE (Dawn @ Apr 28 2004, 12:43)

piss poor attempt there forum definitly 1

Dreadfully sorry...must try harder

 

 

But I will leave you too it, or then again ........... tanka

QUOTE (Dawn @ Apr 28 2004, 12:47)

But I will leave you too it, or then again ........... tanka

Christ!...give me bit and i'll see what I can do

Threads, posts, smilies and thoughts

Meanderingly take life

Then vanish into ether.

Edited April 28, 200420 yr by Kether

Lizard ....... I think you've just been out done

Me too tanka here we come

Club The World is gay

Except for Kether and Jay

But it got me laid.

ok here goes...I may be a syllable out here or there but that's generally the case with Tanka in English:

 

Dawn set the challenge.

Lizard works out a response.

Kethers Haiku was good.

So ill go for a Tanka.

Leaving me as the forum wanker.

 

Yay!...nothing like a bit a self-deprecating humour eh?

 

incidentally...nice one Stu