new and hopefully final version online now.... hope you all like it..

 

version 3

 

the link on my site now points to the new version too!

Edited May 13, 200420 yr by Ian Cashman

tweaking complete...

 

this is the first finished version

 

downloading.. i'll give it a listen in abit

Really like this mate

 

The break at about 4.50 id have a more 'breakbeat' kinda beat to it perhaps, and maybe build it up to more of a crescendo when the main part of the tune drops back in.

Other than that i really like it

cheers m8! im gonna play it out tonight. see what it sounds like on a big system:)

 

Shit yea ur playing out tonite, i forgot all about it

I like the breakbitty bit too

 

the start's pretty funky.. funky build ups are always a plus...

 

and the chord changes make me kinda gasp if that makes sence...

(i know what i want to say- if u dont ask me)

 

very nice mate

not bad work there. just 2 things let the track down for me

 

1) the key change sounded out of place at the beginning of the track. it worked well once the main riff etc was all going and at the end (as it was expected in by that point)

 

2) the percussion needs to be a little punchyer during the breakbeaty bit as the kick drum just sounds over powering and w/o rhythm

 

all the individual sounds have a nice texture to them tho. which is the hardest bit of writeing a tune i find

i really like that... nice work dude.

 

you could make more of the change from the breaky bit to the normal bit about 6 or so minutes through... a chish, chish, chish chish chish chish would work nicely.

i really like the hook on this, a couple of things i would suggest is making the beats more driving, something similar to the beats in the ProbSpot mix of Solid Globe - North Pole, and maybe defining the breakbeaty bit more with something similar to the one in the breakdown of Firewall - Kilimanjaro (original) if u know what i mean!

 

Thats my 2p for what its worth

 

 

i havnt listened to it but if i had id have said make the boomy bits more boomier & and make the build ups build up more.

 

apart from that its great.

 

*loops & riffs

 

 

 

* added those words so i sound like i know what im on about.

good good...

i decided to post it as is, cos ive heard it so much now i need to take a step back and see what other people think.

 

 

i know the breakbeat bit needs work, which is my next mission!

 

 

How did it go down last night with the punters?

i was far too pissed to be attempting and kind of 'crappy cd-deck' mixing so i never played it in my set

i played it b4 the club opened tho, and it sounded kool