http://fileserv1.soundclick.com/fastg6/HiE/ltm+return.mp3

 

Feedback wanted thanks. Paavo heard it from Above & Beyond on Trance.nu and he wants me to send him a copy.

First reactions after a quick listen:

 

The production all sounds fine. My main criticism is that some of the chord progressions sound a little weak to me. In particular, a couple of the transitions from the more "trancey" bits to the more "technoey" bits sound a little forced.

 

The more melodic bit is alright, though I'm not a fan of all the major chords - maybe just a personal preference.

 

There are a couple of clashes that slightly grate to my ear - e.g. at 1:27 the 'F'-'Eb' on the piano part clashes with the 'Fb'-'Eb' in the bassline.

 

The bassline could do with a more rhythmic feel, maybe a bit more definition. It sounds like you've got too much sustain on your bass synth.

 

Hope these comments are helpful.

I dont produce, so heres my feedback.

 

I dont like where u have distored the sound so to speak.

 

Sounds like your tryin to be Gaz West (Dark by Design). The part in subject is 4:37 - 4:47 ish.

 

As its dying down, it doesnt sound so bad, as its not taking over the tune itself, where as early on, thats very much the dominant sound u hear. (within that 10 second time gap.)

 

It goes from this into a very nice, 'melodic trancer' ... it doesnt sound right.

 

Top tune tho. And good effort. Its got the potential i think to go further =)

 

 

Edited May 30, 200420 yr by Mr_Moo