Jump to content

Featured Replies

Posted
  • CTW Members

http://fileserv1.soundclick.com/fastg6/HiE/ltm+return.mp3

 

Feedback wanted thanks. Paavo heard it from Above & Beyond on Trance.nu and he wants me to send him a copy. wub.gif

  • CTW DJs

First reactions after a quick listen:

 

The production all sounds fine. My main criticism is that some of the chord progressions sound a little weak to me. In particular, a couple of the transitions from the more "trancey" bits to the more "technoey" bits sound a little forced.

 

The more melodic bit is alright, though I'm not a fan of all the major chords - maybe just a personal preference.

 

There are a couple of clashes that slightly grate to my ear - e.g. at 1:27 the 'F'-'Eb' on the piano part clashes with the 'Fb'-'Eb' in the bassline.

 

The bassline could do with a more rhythmic feel, maybe a bit more definition. It sounds like you've got too much sustain on your bass synth.

 

Hope these comments are helpful.

  • CTW Members

I dont produce, so heres my feedback.

 

I dont like where u have distored the sound so to speak.

 

Sounds like your tryin to be Gaz West (Dark by Design). The part in subject is 4:37 - 4:47 ish.

 

As its dying down, it doesnt sound so bad, as its not taking over the tune itself, where as early on, thats very much the dominant sound u hear. (within that 10 second time gap.)

 

It goes from this into a very nice, 'melodic trancer' ... it doesnt sound right.

 

Top tune tho. And good effort. Its got the potential i think to go further =)

 

 

Edited by Mr_Moo

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.

Guest
Reply to this topic...
image.png
Clubbing the world together ...