new tune needs feedback

[missxs]

hi guys and girls

 

i have made a new tune and would lvoe to knwo what u think (please no slagging off im new to this)

 

i dont knwo what category it comes under http://www.soundclick.com/util/Streamm3u.m3u?ID=683524&q=hi

 

can u please send all feedback to missxs@missxs.co.uk with teh heading "xs denied feedback"

 

thank you for your time

 

[Claire DC]

Is this dial up or broadband link? Can u give ur soundclick addy and ill go into it and get the right one for what i need and will listen to it!! Also u need to be registered to soundclick (well did need to be) as far as im aware so not many people on here will be, i am so if u give me the addy and ill see what i think

[Chris Hutchinson]

Claire DC said:

Is this dial up or broadband link? Can u give ur soundclick addy and ill go into it and get the right one for what i need and will listen to it!! Also u need to be registered to soundclick (well did need to be) as far as im aware so not many people on here will be, i am so if u give me the addy and ill see what i think

 

I just entered http://www.soundclick.com/missxs into my IE browser at a complete guess and it worked so try that :-)

[Claire DC]

Chris_Hutchinson said:

Claire DC said:

Is this dial up or broadband link? Can u give ur soundclick addy and ill go into it and get the right one for what i need and will listen to it!! Also u need to be registered to soundclick (well did need to be) as far as im aware so not many people on here will be, i am so if u give me the addy and ill see what i think

 

I just entered http://www.soundclick.com/missxs into my IE browser at a complete guess and it worked so try that :-)

 

Thanks babe.. dunno why i didnt try myself but thenit was late

[missxs]

its the XS denied tune - the longest one on there

 

sorry my link was a bit messed up im sorting it now but yeh i can put www.soundclick.com/missxs and get to my page

[Claire DC]

Will listen and make comment a bit later when i have a lil more time on my hands hun!!

[BenRW]

just listened to XS Denied and comments: (sorry if u think i'm a bit harsh but it may help u)

 

bit simple, boring and generally isn't very busy as i would put it, ie hardly nething going on in the track in the background or foreground.

 

Having said that its probably because u haven't been producing for long. Keep at it and u will get better with time.

 

Also wot program are u using as it doesn't sound like a very good one. May be just me tho.

 

And an actual comment on the track, one of the notes before kick comes in is out of key or something and just sounds wrong, can't remember how far in it was

 

Just listened to Riding the Ocean and its better, less simple than denied but again lacks background stuff and generally doesn't sound professional. This will get better with practice.

 

And revenge: all similar comments, too simple and not enough going on to really make it worth playing out or sending to a record company.

 

If u wanna know what i mean by busy listen to nething by nick sentience as he does a lot of background stuff in his productions.

 

Don't be put off by my negative comments but just practice practice practice and eventually it may come together.

 

Again sorry for being harsh but it will help you.

[Wonky]

 

at the end of the day if you ask for an opinion you will get it good or bad.

 

you cant say listen to my tune only comment if you really like it.

[Wonky]

 

i just listened to it and tbh i liked the break and the tune for like the first 15 seconds and then it all gets a bit offkey after that.

 

some good elements in it though if its thrown together properly.

[missxs]

benrostwood said:

just listened to XS Denied and comments: (sorry if u think i'm a bit harsh but it may help u)

 

bit simple, boring and generally isn't very busy as i would put it, ie hardly nething going on in the track in the background or foreground.

 

Having said that its probably because u haven't been producing for long. Keep at it and u will get better with time.

 

Also wot program are u using as it doesn't sound like a very good one. May be just me tho.

 

And an actual comment on the track, one of the notes before kick comes in is out of key or something and just sounds wrong, can't remember how far in it was

 

Just listened to Riding the Ocean and its better, less simple than denied but again lacks background stuff and generally doesn't sound professional. This will get better with practice.

 

And revenge: all similar comments, too simple and not enough going on to really make it worth playing out or sending to a record company.

 

If u wanna know what i mean by busy listen to nething by nick sentience as he does a lot of background stuff in his productions.

 

Don't be put off by my negative comments but just practice practice practice and eventually it may come together.

 

Again sorry for being harsh but it will help you.

 

ta for all that thank you for taking time to listen to my tracks yeh im new and i only use fruity so im still learning thats why i thought posting about it on here would get responses like urs so i can improve so ur not being harsh mate ur being helpful

 

thanx again

[LiquidEyes]

benrostwood said:

Also wot program are u using as it doesn't sound like a very good one. May be just me tho.

It makes no difference what program you use! Even if you use Protools, you tune is only as good as your samples / experience / creativity!

[Guest]

second that.

 

I have a mate you who uses fruity alone and his productions sound just as good as another mate of mine who uses cubase and a full studio set up.

 

Creativity/knowledge is the key.

 

I havent had time to listen yet MsXS but I will. Take the comments on board and keep at it.

[DJ Elemental]

i quite like it.

 

its very minimal - reminds me of psytrance - this track has alot of potential.

 

I like the drone bassline - the kick bass could be with being alot harder but keep it at the depth it is - nice and dark!

 

melody is very basic and not orginal however you could have alot of fun wit this melody.

 

if its alright with you - i'd like to experiment with what i;ve heard and send you a clip of some ideas you could implentment into your track - also i have alot of sample cd's - so if you want some samples PM me your addy and i'll send um up to ya

 

i'll write a proper full review abit later - doing college work atm

[LiquidEyes]

My main criticisms are:

 

* Try to make some better percussion. The drums are all a bit "Casio keyboard" / Rebirth-esque.

* The lead synth sound is a bit naff, and isn't very rhythmically interesting (most of the notes are on the beat). Try making it a bit more syncopated and make some more interesting sounds with a soft synth or something.

* You need a bit more variation. There are not enough different ideas in the track to keep it interesting for the whole duration of the song.

 

Hope this is helpful.

[Elevation1562629805]

it dont work