'F*cked Up' *new tune*

[Sarah C]

Ive still got this tune on my computer at home, so its not the finished thing cos im looking for ways to improve...

 

I know i need more percussion really but i also dont want it to sound too 'muddy'.

 

Please be gentle lol..... but please give feedback on what i need to do to improve..

 

thanks

 

Hi-Fi - http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=1186079&q=Hi

 

Lo-Fi - http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=1186079&q=Lo

[Sarah C]

hmm them links take you to my profile page for some reason.

 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/sarahcmusic.htm

 

 

[Mark]

im quite into this bouncy hard stuff at the moment, the tunes to follow of psy-kopath will be hard un bouncy but with elements of trance in um

 

i think the tune could to with abit more "umph" (only way i can decribe it) tho think alot of this is due to shallow samples, theres no real depth in them, they all seem alittle dry the acctaully tune and production seems alright

 

i'll give it a few more listening and see if i can most anything useful, you'll have to come to mine when i move to london and well make some seriously hard choonage

 

 

[Sarah C]

im actually down south, in london, a week tomoro!

Im DJing down there on Friday 28th at a place called Belushis Basement, the nights called Chemical Reaction.

 

do u live down there already?

 

Im meeting up with Si (clubbing_si...) n he's being my chaffeur...lol

[Chris Hutchinson]

right, first thing that struck me is the definate lack of percussion (tho u did say you knew about that) - the track loses 'depth' because of this unfortunatly

 

Also, the structure seems to be all over the place - too many riffs and drops break things up too much.... you have some good ideas, and with a bit of work it can probably be a half decent track.... its just not my thing im afraid

[Mark]

QUOTE (naughtydj @ May 20 2004, 18:24)

im actually down south, in london, a week tomoro! Im DJing down there on Friday 28th at a place called Belushis Basement, the nights called Chemical Reaction. do u live down there already? Im meeting up with Si (clubbing_si...) n he's being my chaffeur...lol

ooo yea i member reading that somewhere - cant member tho - i'll be in london next weekend for wildchild so i'll see if i can attend Chemical Reaction, i've never been to Belushis Basement before

 

no i dont live in london yet - moving in about 5 weeks time