Simon C - Pain (re-work) online now

[Simon_C1562626685]

I( posted the original version of this tune up a fairly long while ago, on both here tidy forums and on generoproject.com. It got a farily good response but the main criticism was the repetetiveness of the main lead, this re-working i feel has sorted that. It would be great if i could get a bit of feedback on this tune. Thanks in advance to anyone who has the time to check it out. The links are below

 

For those of you on 56K connections

lo-fi stream

 

Broadband connections

hi-fi stream

 

or the site it's hosted on

download here

 

cheers again if anyone can give me any feedback

[Clubbing Si]

mate ive had this in my car on loop as dani will tell ya lol its fookin outstanding!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! alongside glazby tunes etc... it fits perfect!!!!!!!! LOVE IT MAKE MORE BEEYATCH LOL

[DJ Elemental]

choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!! choon!!

 

 

well you already know what i think of from the orginal, but fookin quality stuff mate, love it!

[Simon_C1562626685]

haha, cheers guys, was really surprised how well this tune went down the first time. Cheers for the comments again people, and i am workin on a new tune at the minute, so hopefully expect this in a week or so

[Simon_C1562626685]

Anyone else want to take a listen, would mean a lot to me to get a few more comments on this tune

[LiamStyles]

Had a listen y'day mate - my verdict.....

 

Top draw mate, is better than the 1st version - well reworked. Keep em coming!

[Simon_C1562626685]

Cheers dude, and thanx for taking the time to listen

[Clubbing Si]

the force is strong si, but dont give ureself to the dark side (garage lol)

[DJ Elemental]

just played this choon through the 5k's worth of ampage i have in the studio

 

one think i did notice, the bass line seems to be abit high, although that may be due to the keychange, thou it does seem to stick out abit when played at high volume

[Ian Cashman]

your leads are good m8, but i dont like the bassline and some of the percussion sounds are a bit crappy.. get some filters on 'em!!

 

other than that m8, its well put together and for the majority flows pretty well... good job done m8!

 

ps.. dont take anything i say to heart cos i hate hard house lol

[Simon_C1562626685]

cheers for comments guys

will have a look into the bass Mark, your probably right about it, i'm gonna change it so the key change doesn't happen every 4 bars, but theres 4 bars with it flat, then the key change bit after the first 4 bars. If u get what i mean. I been drinking so u probably don't

 

Modular, ur probably right abou tthe percussion, i'm pretty [censored] at writing percussion loops, but if u can point out which sounds i'll see if i can attempt to do anything about them

 

thanx again everyone

 

[DJ Butch D]

[censored] quality, could really do with a copy so I can play it out....any chance of sending one??

[Simon_C1562626685]

course u can have one man, i got a few CD's to sort out this weekend (when i finally get a day off) so PM me your addy and i'll sort it out for you, will put a few of my other tunes on there aswell for you.

 

Btw the versionof pain i'm sendin out on CD to people will be slightly changed, more specifically i'm changin the bit just b4 the bass amd also more than likely not usin the bass key change till the Main lead comes in. And changin the build up to the bass.

 

Also cheers again for any comments on this tune

[LiamStyles]

Could you send me out a copy aswell Si, will give it a hammering at my monthly trance gig.

 

Did you get my PM??