My new tune Dead Head - F*cking C*nts

[LTM]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/ltmmusic.htm

 

It's the tune at the top of the linked page called F*cking C*nts. Feedback wanted ta very much.

[LiquidEyes]

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[BenRW]

just listening now

 

to start i think that the initial sound FX are too loud for the rest of the track (they also reappear a few bars in.

 

bass line doesn't seem quite hard enough imo. Needs a bit of beefing up

 

bit slow imo (maybe just 3-4 bpm faster would make it sound better - preferably more)

 

nice FX on the vocals at about 4.19. makes it sound really dark

 

like main riff. suitably dark for hardstyle.

 

best bit imo is the part with the distorted kick drum etc that comes in at 4.53. Further use of it i think would strengthen the track

 

overall i don't think as strong as your other hardstyle track that u posted the link to on here but a great track all the same

[LTM]

QUOTE (LiquidEyes @ Jun 15 2004, 19:14)

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Benrostwood good review mate nice one.

 

Next up is an Oliver Lieb style melodic Trancer should be finished in about a week. I'm gonna send this Hardstyle track and the other to a few dutch labels hopefully one of them will take it on.

[Guest]

not a comment on the track itself (not had chance to listen yet), but is there really a need for such language in a title?

[BenRW]

QUOTE (Mr_Happy @ Jun 16 2004, 12:47)

not a comment on the track itself (not had chance to listen yet), but is there really a need for such language in a title?

theres a sample in it saying that

[Guest]

Is there really need for such an offensive sample

[BenRW]

depends, if it works with the mood of the tune then yes. this track is very dark sounding as a lot of hardstyle is and i think that the sample works well with it

[LTM]

It's only words. I know loads of tunes with offensive titles this ain't as mad as some.

 

What about C*nt Smasher by Pulsedriver?

 

But yeah in my tune I have a sample of this voice saying "Cos I hate you f*cking c*nt" so it's a fitting title I reckon.

[LiquidEyes]

QUOTE (Mr_Happy @ Jun 16 2004, 14:15)

Is there really need for such an offensive sample

No. In fact it creates the preconception that the tune is shit before you've even heard it, and that you need to resort to novelty value to leave any lasting mark on the listener.

 

(...though it will probably increase the chances of it getting signed to some hard house/dance/style/core label, and result in lots of sales to 17-year-olds...)

[LTM]

QUOTE (LiquidEyes @ Jun 16 2004, 15:01)

QUOTE (Mr_Happy @ Jun 16 2004, 14:15) Is there really need for such an offensive sample No. In fact it creates the preconception that the tune is shit before you've even heard it, and that you need to resort to novelty value to leave any lasting mark on the listener.   (...though it will probably increase the chances of it getting signed to some hard house/dance/style/core label, and result in lots of sales to 17-year-olds...)

[LiamStyles]

QUOTE (LiquidEyes @ Jun 16 2004, 15:01)

QUOTE (Mr_Happy @ Jun 16 2004, 14:15) Is there really need for such an offensive sample No. In fact it creates the preconception that the tune is shit before you've even heard it, and that you need to resort to novelty value to leave any lasting mark on the listener.   (...though it will probably increase the chances of it getting signed to some hard house/dance/style/core label, and result in lots of sales to 17-year-olds...) Get off your high horse Andy.

[James]

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[Chris Hutchinson]

QUOTE (LiquidEyes @ Jun 15 2004, 19:14)

I promise not to hijack your post this time.

didnt last long did it

[LiquidEyes]

Oops. Sorry.