A piece of my school work wen i was very young...

[Mr Moo]

My mum typed it out and emailed me... awww

 

Quite funny actually.

 

 

"One year Drew and Tanya the hamsters wished they had babies. On Christmas Day it came true. Tanya said to Drew I’m pregnant and that night Tanya had babies. They were lovely hamsters. Two of them seemed to play adventures around the burrow.

 

Four months later they went off to build their own burrow. While they doing that they found some rope, a knife, a gun, a machine gun, a bazooka and a hand gun each. Then they made a burrow extra big so like Hammy made one and so did Hannibal. Underground they found an army suit. They put it on and found a backpack then found a hole for the knife, the gun, machine gun and a bazooka and a hand gun. Then they went out to find some bedding and some food.

 

They went back to their field and a few days went past and they thought that they would change it into a secret base. By that time all their friend knew where they lived. They called this their Hamsters Base. It had a notice saying, All hamsters please come and join our base.

 

Next day they went to the gun shop and bought lots of bullets and lots of rockets to go in the bazooka and bullets for the machine gun and hand guns. Then they went back to base and found a mouse shot and nearly dead. Luckily they had a first aid kit with them. Then they knew that someone would be attacking the mice and then all the hamsters inside helped fight the weasels.

 

Next year the mice and the hamsters won and Hannibal died of old age.

 

THE END

 

By Drew Tilney"

 

Edited February 15, 2004 by Mr_Moo

[jonm]

brings a tear to the eye....

[Jimmy]

impressive

[Trouble]

Beautifull drew brought a tear to my eye

 

 

how old was u by the way

[Guest Shenlong]

Think you missed out on your true calling as the next shakespeare!

[Tresh]

How old were u when u wrote this?

[CaptinRik]

Drew,

 

Did you like guns, rockets and knives when u were a kid by any chance..?

 

Remind me not to get on the wrong side of you.. (bloomin psyco . . hehe)

 

Sayin that, it was rather cute and it brought a tear to my eye when Hanibal died of old age.

 

Rick.

[Dizzy]

Drew how old were you when you started doing drugs?!

[BenRW]

QUOTE (Dizzy @ Feb 16 2004, 04:23 PM)

Drew how old were you when you started doing drugs?!

my thoughts exactly

[ChrisT]

 

Drew, im worried now, i will get ya trainers back to you, honest

[mistress_hoover]

awwwwww how cute!!

 

drew, when you realised that you had a talent in writing stories did you also realised you like anal sex??

 

 

[Mr Moo]

No, i always knew i liked anal.

[mistress_hoover]

QUOTE (Mr_Moo @ Feb 17 2004, 16:23)

No, i always knew i liked anal.

thought so!